Wednesday 5 February 2014

Second Presentation with Feedback


Class feedback: 

"Good ideas."

"Was very good."

"Nice PowerPoint"

"I found their video very effective, it made people want to watch."

"Good poster design, fabulous ideas."

"Very good presentation."

"Good understanding of target audience and clear voices from both.."

"Good presentation  and a good presentation style."

"Smartphone Logo linked in with target audience well. Good use of stats. Logo and Poster good. Video good."

"Clear presentation with good ideas and great end products. Spoke clearly and explained everything with good points"

"Good film understood it."

"Presented well, both spoke loudly and clearly. Answered all questions within the presentation and covered all areas of progress. Great logo and poster ideas, e.g. smartphone attracts target audience. Great use of statistics and conventions. Links back to the brief."

"The posters are all the same which is plain and could do with different types of posters and not reading off a script"

"Have more people in your video"

"Video sound could if been better and a bit too much writing"

"It was okay but think Polly spoke a little to fast to understand what she was saying sometimes and they went through the slides quite quick."

"Maybe Polly could slow down when talking"

"Could speak clearer."

"Couldn't hear what was being said in their film."

"They need to cut out the interference with the microphone."

"To improve, it was a bit difficult to hear the documentary"

"Couldn't see some of the writing. Couldn't really hear the film because of the wind and cars"

This is the PowerPoint that we used and the video that we showed.. 




Second Presentation from jessfareymedia

This is a link to the video on YouTube


1 comment:

  1. Both this presentation and the first presentation to the client were excellent. WELL PLANNED, CLEAR FOCUS N THE BRIef, excellent understanding of their project, aims and audience. Great presentation skills too.

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